雅思小作文考官建議

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雅思小作文考官建議

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雅思小作文考官建議

　　一、Don't copy the question for your introduction. You should paraphrase the question (i.e. rewrite it using some different words).

　　不要把問題照搬照抄放在你的引言當中，要用不同的單詞重新把問題改寫一遍。

　　二、Don't forget to separate your paragraphs clearly.

　　別忘了清晰地分開每一個段落。

　　三、Don't forget to write a good summary/overview of the information. A quick one-sentence conclusion is not good enough. I prefer to put the overview straight after the introduction, and I try to write 2 sentences describing the information in general. You won't get a high score if you don't write a good overview.

　　不要忘了將所得的信息很好地總結/概述一次。一句話的結論并不夠好，一般來說，我更傾向于把概述后直接放在引言后面，并用兩句話來描述信息。如果沒有一個好的概述，就不會得到一個好的分數。

　　四、Don't describe items separately . You should always try to compare things if it is possible to do so. Instead of describing 2 lines separately, compare the 2 lines at key points.

　　不要單獨地描述一個點，如果有可能的話，嘗試去做一些對比。同樣是兩個句子，將它們的關鍵點進行比較說明，好過單獨地進行描述。

　　五、Don't try to describe every number on a chart or graph (unless there are only a few numbers). A key skill in task 1 is being able to choose the key information and describe or compare it well. I usually mention around 6 or 7 numbers in my main paragraphs.

　　不要用圖表或圖形來描述每一個數字(除非只有幾個數字)。在task 1中，有一個關鍵的技巧就是，選擇關鍵的信息，并很好地去描述它或者進行對比。我通常都會在一個主要段落中，提及6~7個數字。

　　六、Don't spend longer than 20 minutes on task 1. Practise spending 5 minutes on each of your 4 paragraphs. Stop yourself after 20 minutes; remember that task 2 is worth more marks.

　　Task 1 所花的答題時間不該超過20分鐘，好好練習如何花5分鐘的時間在每一個段落上，一共4個段落，則一共不超過20分鐘，一到時間就停止做題。記住task 2能拿的分數更高。

　　七、It is better to write in regular, not very sophisticated English, than to use phrases or structures you don’t fully understand.

　　比起用一些你自己都不是完全理解的短語和結構，不如用一些不是很復雜的、比較日常的英語。

　　八、If you need Band 6 - no need for complex sentence structure. If your goal is Band 7 - then show advanced sentence structure, language and vocabulary.

　　如果你的目標使6分，那就用一些不是很復雜的句子結構，但如果你想哪7分，那就用一些高級的句子結構、語言和詞匯。

　　九、Don’t write more than 260-265 words in IELTS Writing 2 task. Why? Not because you will get lower mark, but because of these 2 reasons:1) It takes more time2) More words = more mistakes在雅思task 2 寫作中，寫作字數不要超過260-265個字。為什么?因為你寫作分數低的原因不外乎以下兩個：1)花更多的時間(時間不夠用)2)字數越多，錯誤越多

　　十、If you are told to cover specific points in your essay/letter - cover every point, examiners actually count them.如果文章要求你在文章中要具體地包含某些點，那就一一例舉出來，因為考官會去數。

　　十一、Don’t overuse connecting words (like However, Furthermore, Moreover, etc) - examiners are watching for you to do that.不要過多使用連接詞(例如，但是，此外，等)，考官就等看著你這么做，然后扣分!

　　延伸閱讀：雅思作文有效寫作的五個要素

　　1. 一致：如句內的邏輯關系，注意檢查是否存在簡單推論、邏輯殘缺、邏輯悖論、依賴偏見等。

　　Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

　　→ He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician.

　　2. 連貫：這個問題在平行結構、共用主語、使用指代的情況下尤其需要注意。

　　We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.

　　→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.

　　Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.

　　He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.

　　→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured.

　　Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

　　→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.

　　Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

　　He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

　　→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting.

　　Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

　　3. 簡潔：英美文化推崇坦率和直接，通常不需要體現咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。

　　It was small in size and blue in colour.

　　→ It was small and blue.

　　He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France.

　　→ He prefers French wines.

　　4. 強調：正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea)，每個段落都要有主題句(topic sentence)一般，每個句子都要圍繞一個中心觀點清晰地呈現出作者想要表現的重點。

　　He is modest and hardworking and is a good student.

　　→ He is a good student, modest and hardworking.

　　There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple.

　　→ In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old.

　　At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad would be possible.

　　→ The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew that something bad would happen.

　　5. 多樣：中文重重復，英文重替代，中英差異使然。

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